One rainy evening in July

July 7th, 2007 by Fraser

We walked, turning down the emptiest streets
with longest shadows; streets with few
cars to drown out halting words.

We sipped bad coffee from plastic cups…
it warmed my hands, but not my throat;
cold and trepidation reduced
my eloquence to a rasp.

You were as lovely and troubled as ever,
and with reluctant glances, your eyes said
‘This is not an ending, but not
the beginning you so long desired’.

Posted in Poems

5 Responses

  1. Jim

    Is that about your coffee with AJ last night? :P

  2. Fraser

    uh… sure.

  3. Lani

    you write well :)

  4. AJ

    in the interest of accuracy. i had iced chocolate.

  5. Snail

    Iced chocolate or not, it is still a beautiful poem.

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